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Won't you be my angel? by ~Failaine:iconFailaine:

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Will you be my angel
and save me from my fears?
Hold me close when I
Give in to all my tears...

Will you be my angel
and save me from night
fly me from the darkness
and bring me to the light...

Will you be my angel
When no one else is near
When no one sees me falling
when no one else can hear...

Save me from myself
because my web has been intangled
my love, my dear,
won't you be my angel?
©2009 ~Failaine
:iconfailaine:

Author's Comments

So, I like this one. It's not FIVE pages long like normal. Hope you guys like it too! :)

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~SasukesWolfBabe Mar 21, 2009, 8:31:11 AM
very nice.=)

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Marcus:That's the last time we take directions from a blind guy!
Me: Blind guy?I thought those sunglasses were to make him look cool!
Chris:He had a guide-dog with him!
Me:I thought that was his cellphone!
Both:NO!What the hell is wrong with you?!
Me:^^'
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~rain-on-roses Mar 21, 2009, 8:34:21 AM
I like it a lot. It reminds me of a poem that i wrote called "The Angel's Hero." I like the second stanza the best. Good job!

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"The question of common sense is always, 'What is it good for?'- a question which would abolish the rose and be answered triumphantly by the cabbage." -James Russell Lowell
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~Failaine Mar 21, 2009, 8:52:05 AM
:D Thank you!

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Two muffins are in the oven.
One says to the other "God it's hot in here."
The other one replies "Oh no... It's a talking muffin!!"
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~Failaine Mar 21, 2009, 8:52:18 AM
Thank you! :D :glomp:

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Two muffins are in the oven.
One says to the other "God it's hot in here."
The other one replies "Oh no... It's a talking muffin!!"
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~SasukesWolfBabe Mar 21, 2009, 8:54:10 AM
Np.^.^:iconglompage:

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Marcus:That's the last time we take directions from a blind guy!
Me: Blind guy?I thought those sunglasses were to make him look cool!
Chris:He had a guide-dog with him!
Me:I thought that was his cellphone!
Both:NO!What the hell is wrong with you?!
Me:^^'
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~Failaine Mar 22, 2009, 4:39:27 AM
:D

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Two muffins are in the oven.
One says to the other "God it's hot in here."
The other one replies "Oh no... It's a talking muffin!!"
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
~SasukesWolfBabe Mar 22, 2009, 8:09:30 AM
:aww:

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Marcus:That's the last time we take directions from a blind guy!
Me: Blind guy?I thought those sunglasses were to make him look cool!
Chris:He had a guide-dog with him!
Me:I thought that was his cellphone!
Both:NO!What the hell is wrong with you?!
Me:^^'
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~Itachisgrl4ever16 Mar 22, 2009, 10:13:31 AM
i like it a lot. very short and it goes together haha and i like that though it reminds me sorta of this thing i wrote in my notebook a while back

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Escape The Fate :skullbones:


Make me smile :] :tux:


"Oh boy you think your ready for, damn girl can I get it, get it."

:stereo:
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~Failaine Mar 22, 2009, 4:41:22 PM
:D cool! Everyone's telling me that it reminds them of something they wrote, and I'm like "I swear I didn't steal it... this was ALL my own." But that's cool. You should post it sometime. :D

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Two muffins are in the oven.
One says to the other "God it's hot in here."
The other one replies "Oh no... It's a talking muffin!!"
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