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Alone
Amongst the masses
Hidden
Amongst the ashes
Betrayed
Deep in the shadows
Calling
For someone I know
Crying
In spite of my confidence
Falling
Losing my balance
Dying
Without a soul who knows it
Screaming
Out my secret
Breathing
My last lungful of air
Knowing
That I was the only one who cared
©2009 ~Failaine
:iconfailaine:

Author's Comments

Well, I wasn't really feeling this one, but I kind of got it down. :D It's super emo for some reason, and I can't figure out what made me write such a depressing poem. I'll do a happier one next time! Honestly, though, I'm better at sad. Oh well. I hope that you guys like this!

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:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
very good!But still a bit sad.=(

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Marcus:That's the last time we take directions from a blind guy!
Me: Blind guy?I thought those sunglasses were to make him look cool!
Chris:He had a guide-dog with him!
Me:I thought that was his cellphone!
Both:NO!What the hell is wrong with you?!
Me:^^'
:iconfailaine:
I know. I keep wondering why all of my poems come out that way, but I just can't guess.

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Two muffins are in the oven.
One says to the other "God it's hot in here."
The other one replies "Oh no... It's a talking muffin!!"
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
hmm.idk either.:shrug:but still all your poems kick ass.^^

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Marcus:That's the last time we take directions from a blind guy!
Me: Blind guy?I thought those sunglasses were to make him look cool!
Chris:He had a guide-dog with him!
Me:I thought that was his cellphone!
Both:NO!What the hell is wrong with you?!
Me:^^'
:iconfailaine:
:D Thank you! Yours too!

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Two muffins are in the oven.
One says to the other "God it's hot in here."
The other one replies "Oh no... It's a talking muffin!!"
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
aww...thankies.^^

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Marcus:That's the last time we take directions from a blind guy!
Me: Blind guy?I thought those sunglasses were to make him look cool!
Chris:He had a guide-dog with him!
Me:I thought that was his cellphone!
Both:NO!What the hell is wrong with you?!
Me:^^'
:iconfailaine:
:D you're welcome.

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Two muffins are in the oven.
One says to the other "God it's hot in here."
The other one replies "Oh no... It's a talking muffin!!"
:iconsasukeswolfbabe:
:iconhuggleplz:

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Marcus:That's the last time we take directions from a blind guy!
Me: Blind guy?I thought those sunglasses were to make him look cool!
Chris:He had a guide-dog with him!
Me:I thought that was his cellphone!
Both:NO!What the hell is wrong with you?!
Me:^^'
:iconicedragonanime:
I like it!!!

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No matter how subtle the wizard, a knife between his shoulder blades will seriously cramp his style.
:iconfailaine:
Thank you! i just put up another one. :D The next one is a little less depressing. :D

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Two muffins are in the oven.
One says to the other "God it's hot in here."
The other one replies "Oh no... It's a talking muffin!!"

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